Saturday, April 21, 2018
Lost Love, Girlfriend Comments
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The last time that I saw you
was in a pleasant dream.
While sleeping the afternoon away
trying not to be heard or seen.
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Carl Roussell
21 April 2018
The first two lines in this poem are very strong, really good writing! The last time that I saw you was in a pleasant dream.
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7/30/2025 6:23:44 AM # 1.0.0
It sounds as though the dream didn't end when you awoke! Wondering how the man from Peru figured into the picture! A captivating write that had me on the edge of my seat to see what would happen next- - I just love story poems!