Sunday, August 26, 2012

Lost Love And A Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

We face with a hard moment in our life
We think that we have no values, so we are not alive

Once, there was a man who had a love, a pure one
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Ellias Anderson Jr.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 01 September 2012

the fickle nature of mind is well expressed here! Nice to read the first part!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 August 2012

He woke up, then a view of sunrise was appear Simple noble man forget those fake dreams with no fear - wow wonderful 10+++

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Eindaray Kyaw 30 August 2012

Well done..bro! I appreciate you because you can manage you long-story poem in an easy flow!

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Terry O'leary 29 August 2012

Good poem Ellias... nice imagery, interesting tale... Terry

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Unwritten Soul 26 August 2012

Nice story and telling in easy way to capture mind imagery features...that's nice to see your new poem_Unwritten Soul

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

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