Lost Love Comments

This one i really enjoyed - it flows so well and i admit i wasnt prepared for the second half of it - 10 +

i love this poem. i saw the whole story in my mind. really great write!

Had you loved him... you could not do such a thing, taking his life! He loved you, maybe he got jealous and lost control that he hit you. Because you thought he was not happy with you anymore, you took his life for you do not want that he will love another. Sad but passionate poem about love! A 10.