Lost Love Comments

...an ammmmazing composition indeed.........10

I like this comparison 'the Sun and a wife'. People we really love are alwyas the Sun for us. And leaving on a stormy day makes me think of a dear person who went away, and all the world became dark. It is a very good poem.

I like this. I particularly liked the lines: 'My Sun, my Sun, she went away.' and then the repetition of this Sun-sun phrase in 'My Sun, my Sun come back to me.' Nice.