Monday, January 21, 2008

Lost Love Comments

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Why’d you have to go and break my heart?
Can’t you see I’m falling apart?
What we had was a fairytale, why’d we have to fail?
I let myself get close to you, thinking you would love me too,
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Roxy Gonro
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George F. Hunter 25 April 2009

Good write Rox. I always like a bit of rhyme in a poem.

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Matt Soriano 21 January 2008

why can't i go through somthing like this? it seems that all the good poems come from people that lived through this stuff. i know some day i'll be able to write like this i hope. anyway grate poem! 'write on'

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