By one step two steps
I walk thousands of miles
Now on to another millennium
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The hurt comes thru, very poetically too! A memorable poem of hurt and true love.
Love gives or takes maintaining no proportionality.. well done....Congrats!
Thanks to everyone those who read me, gave time and did comment; and wecome every reader to this world class literary site and come to enjoy here the poetic unique gist where I never lose the love.
A beautiful and vivid depiction of lost love. Wonderful poetic expressions and great imagery.
I have enjoyed tremendously your amazingly created poem. Great poem!
CONGRATULATIONS with your most deserving Member Poem Of The Day, MAHTAB! My personal appreciation for the theme of love, my most favourite theme in poetry, TOP Score!
What is lost is lost. The future always holds ample hopes. Nice poem Mahtab
Keep plodding and keep sharing your experiences. Congratulations for the poem of the day.
Sterling imagery! Poetry can redeem lost love. I don't see it as a sad poem mourning the lost love but as an acceptance of the unwanted. As an expression of salvation through poetry. Bravo!
Something lost, is lost. If gotten back, alright. If not, Let Go is the best policy
Don't rush love or it won't happen, and time is a good, and probably the only, healer.
come, fill up the empty canvas of poetic sky, write on the poetic field, collect all loving poetic crops
lost love is lost in your way; don't cry for the lost something; be brave heart
nothing is stoppable; all is well and all in well; the well is lost of behind something! - is it?
Lost love is tragic and so very painful. Yet, if we can learn the lessons from that pain, our lives will be enriched. Sorry for missing you receiving POD. A Very Hearty Belated Congrats, Mahtab!