Sunday, August 30, 2015

Lost Love.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I could reverse time
I would play the moments we had in a slow motion
Each kiss we share, we went deep
We took no precaution
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Akintoye TemiTayo
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 November 2015

Our passion burned like fire, Together forever was the notion you were my invaluable devotion. very fine expressions in this poem. liked it very much. tha nk you

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Akintoye Temitayo 22 December 2015

Thank you!

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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2015

Beautiful love poem, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned from inner recesses of the heart. Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. It's whimsical and temperamental, coming when it pleases, and may leave without warning. Thanks for sharing Tayo. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Yewande Adedokun 08 September 2015

Lovely write mate. thanks fro sharing

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 02 September 2015

What a solid composition? Nice and thoughtful one, too! ! !

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Akintoye Temitayo 22 December 2015

Thanks

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Charity Nduhiu 01 September 2015

Love is a dangerous disease that consumes slowly. I hope you found new love. Nice write

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Fabrizio Frosini 31 August 2015

maybe we could say, with Shakespeare: Love is a familiar; love is a devil: there is no evil angel but love - Love's Labour's Lost, Act I, Scene II

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2015

An intense poem, Akintoye

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