Friday, November 16, 2012

Lost Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Less pain is goodbye
Breaks the heart when cry
In times she stands
Holding both your hands
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Jahan Zeb
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Persian Khushi 20 November 2012

Excellently written! beautifully brought message accross.

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David Threadgold 18 November 2012

A very well written poem with a strong romantic message. well done a pleasure to read.

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Payal Parande 16 November 2012

a little sad, but splendidly expressed sir..........

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Stevie Taite 16 November 2012

Oh there is nothing worse than when you are in love with some one and they think of you only as a friend. Then proceed to tell you all of their ups and downs in love! This little dilemma well captures here!

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Unwritten Soul 16 November 2012

Lyrical writing, it's like a movie scene hahahaha nice and you done it with a good surprise..keep it up! _Soul

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Poetheart Morgan 16 November 2012

Sad or happy? ? ? You can be the real love so she wants celebrate with you your back. Simple like that! ! ! ! As i say, love has not rules! ! !

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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