Less pain is goodbye
Breaks the heart when cry
In times she stands
Holding both your hands
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A very well written poem with a strong romantic message. well done a pleasure to read.
Oh there is nothing worse than when you are in love with some one and they think of you only as a friend. Then proceed to tell you all of their ups and downs in love! This little dilemma well captures here!
Lyrical writing, it's like a movie scene hahahaha nice and you done it with a good surprise..keep it up! _Soul
Sad or happy? ? ? You can be the real love so she wants celebrate with you your back. Simple like that! ! ! ! As i say, love has not rules! ! !
Excellently written! beautifully brought message accross.