Thursday, October 18, 2012

Lost Love Comments

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I'm trying not to love you,
I'm trying not to care,
I'm trying not to live my life,
Wishing you were there
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Freedom From Darkness
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Shivani Misra 28 October 2012

Nice one.. But don't stop living.. Never.. Keep sharing.. :)

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Neela Nath Das 19 October 2012

So moving. I can't go away from the spell of your diction. Thanks.

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Alex Medina 18 October 2012

I just recently went through a situation frighteningly similar to what your poem describes. The last line struck me like the emotional hammer blow that struck my heart. Powerful words, heartfelt, painful. Fantastic.

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