She didn't want to lose him
But she's losing herself
And she's slowly dying
As he lives for someone else
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The misery of an innocent, good-natured, wonderful girl is brought out in this poem. She is losing herself and she doesn't tell him as he has been living for somebodyelse. This kind of Platonic love and the longing character in silence are the extraordinary things to write about in poetry. Well done. *****
A sacrificing extraordinary girl. Platonic love. She is losing herself without telling him as he is living for somebody else. Wonderful poem. *****
This is a great poem...she must feel terrible. It reminds me of a song