Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Lost Lilac Comments

Rating: 4.8

While raking the bottom of my heart
Carpeted with yellowed withered leaves,
A flicker of hope
Searches for the pink lilac,
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M Asim Nehal 19 November 2016

Heartfelt poem, in love one should have patience to overcome the heartbreak.

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Sranisha Francis 27 October 2015

very nice.................

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 October 2015

Flow of emotions with great intensity is evident in the poem. Search for the rays of hopes that is pink lilac adds a nice flavor to the poem on the whole. Ten points. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 07 October 2015

Wonderfully depicted, metaphorical poem, Sanjukta. Thanks

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 October 2015

Wish you two help to revive the relationship and stay blessed. Beautiful! !

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Sanjukta Nag

Sanjukta Nag

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