Saturday, November 3, 2018

Lost Like This Comments

Rating: 3.8

Lost Like This'

Oh, I remember,
Reading my poem about ' Baby Falak and Nirvaya'
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Bharati Nayak
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Akhtar Jawad 08 December 2018

Man could not evolve in a man, he is still a beast. Shame on all of us. A touching poem.

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Bharati Nayak 14 December 2018

Thank you Akhtar Jawadji for your sensitive reading.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2018

The poem could not see the light of the day! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 12 November 2018

Thank you Edward Kofi Louis for your encouraging comment.Perhaps the poem was not lost.It is appearing in a new form, inspiring to write many more.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 November 2018

today in the papers i read a 17 year old snake bitten girl was raped by medic and his 3 friends in the icu has blasphemy reached its end sadness the human mind needs to be condemned

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Bharati Nayak 05 November 2018

Very sad indeed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2018

The sexual attack on Baby Falak - a two year old baby girl and on 'Nirvaya' 23 years virgin of South Delhi was so brutal and inhuman. These incidents took place in 2012. Your poems in these events have been lost is really a matter of regret. Taking this theme you have weaved a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 04 November 2018

Thank you so much Sri Kumarmani Mahakul for your sensitive reading and valuable opinion.

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 November 2018

Your concern is genuine. We write poems only that we love to write. Unless the poems stir the conscience of the people and guide them to work for the betterment of the society they just end up as an instruments of temporary joy. Such an eye opener poem.10+++++++++++

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Bharati Nayak 04 November 2018

Poetry has much power.It has the power to change a society.Poem like 'Vande Mataram' could inspire nationalist movement in India.Epics like Ramayan and Mahabharat have impacted Indian culture for centuries.My desperation is like any sensitive poet when he sees that the maladies he wishes to change still continues to afflict the society.

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Susheela Shiju 03 November 2018

well penned dear Bharati!

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Bharati Nayak 04 November 2018

Many thanks Susheela Shiju.

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Dave Walker 03 November 2018

Very emotional notes, highlighting the tragedies of truly awful crimes.

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Bharati Nayak 04 November 2018

Thank you so much Dave Walker.The aweful crime still continues in society.It is a matter of much concern.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 November 2018

What more have I done than mere writing poems? good one

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Bharati Nayak 04 November 2018

Thank you poet Gajanan Mishra for your kind opinion.Much obliged.

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