Lost Is My Quiet Comments

I like the way you played with the words in this piece. You combined lost, quiet and love in every stanza. Its a nice little poem. Keep penning. B.B.

wow this is a beautiful poem wirttn so gud....i like ur style of writing 10/10+++++++++ Smash-Ley=)

this is sad but written so beautifully........likes it i do^-^

This is so sweet and sad at the same time. I know how you must be feeling. This poem is so elegant and quite beautiful. Its very neatly written, well done!

Ok, chills....I really like this poem and the way it is arranged. 'But forever more, Lost is my quiet' is a beautiful way to close the poem. Good write! Thanks for sharing!

awwwwwwwwwwwwww.....sooooo sad. please b happy. i hate it when my friends are depressed