Lost In Your Own World Comments
Severe tides conceil pain beneath dark waters,
By the moonlight mezmerized you walk the path of shattered dreams,
To the fortress called night where lost souls dance,
To the melodic whispers of the dead widow's song.
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a deep thoughts..conscience had to prevail..great write.. Ency Bearis
A deep and darkly toned piece of classical imagery. An almost sonnet! Bravo. Rgds, Ivan
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7/26/2025 11:47:55 PM # 1.0.0
Awesome job! It makes you think, and the word choice was amazing Very good write Scale 1-10......13!