Monday, January 4, 2010

Lost In Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m lost in your Eyes
I cannot come back
This beautiful ardent emotion
Has covered my desperation attack
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Aiden Florence
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well, i like it...but i feel like there is something missing... i really enjoyed the ending...but as for the rest of the poem, i didnt enjoy as much...

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