Sunday, September 25, 2011

/ Lost In Words / Comments

Rating: 4.3

the sea was dust,
the dust was sea,
and both were sky
no one there
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ahmed khaled
sea
COMMENTS
Crisa Earley 02 February 2012

I'm not quit sure but I really enjoyed this poem. It's beautiful, and has a certain innocence about it. It gives you a Brie into the poets solitude while he's writting. Very good!

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Deep Mukherjee 01 February 2012

yes; this is poetry and i am inspired; someday when i will be able enough; i will follow your footsteps! ! !

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Auro Bhattacharya 30 January 2012

Yes this one is one of the best works of you dear. Very imagery and deep meaning. Fantastic and you deserve the best appreciation.

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Fiona Eris Strand 27 January 2012

Thank you for inviting me to read this. I very much enjoy short and concise abstractions of this kind.

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Alicia Meyers 27 January 2012

I like it. :) Very good.

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Heyyou Boy 12 January 2012

insightful enjoyed this poem good job

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Lawrence H 11 January 2012

Short wordings and sweet poem with a rhyme..I gave a rating of 6/10...maybe you inser more paragraphs to make 12 stanza to form a sonnet.

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Muhammmad Algnash 07 January 2012

I like it. I want contact u via my email

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Rigzin Namgyal 03 January 2012

..i wish i could give you more than 10..but sadly that is the only limit here..

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Rigzin Namgyal 03 January 2012

..the sea was dust.. ..the dust was sea..and both were sky.. ..these words made a chill run through my body.. ..words were few..but very very powerful..

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Champs Ulysses Cabinatan 03 January 2012

I love this poem. powerful.

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Sd Tiwari 02 January 2012

Beautiful Khaled! If lost in words, then poems come out.

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Bella Stylos 02 January 2012

I like this poem! its makes me go over my life as a poet!

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Unwritten Soul 31 December 2011

For poet, everything just inside the pen..you can create illusion in mind just by word..your pen is a wand if you are wizard hahahaha....but also your pen is like crown for a King... You never lost in word, if you as a poet sew the nice words for heart to wear..Love in poetry is exist as poet use pen to write...Hmm maybe use computer in today's life hahaha Joking_Unwritten Soul

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Hans Vr 30 December 2011

All alone with your pen and the magic of sea, dust and sky. Many times words fall short to describe such magical moments of amazing beauty. Wonderful observaion, masterfully penned.

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Eric Cockrell 30 December 2011

'lost in words...', found in stillness! good poem!

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Margaret Beil 30 December 2011

Hey Ahmed I like this- a little prayer of concentration for poets (like me) :)

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Sarah Hardin 30 December 2011

A lovely poem, though short of words it is pact with meaning. Thank you for sharing.

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Alicia Meyers 30 December 2011

Amazing piece, I love it(:

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Young Church Poetry 30 December 2011

Brilliant piece, short but says a lot. Thank you very much for sharing, this is amazing.

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