the sea was dust,
the dust was sea,
and both were sky
no one there
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yes; this is poetry and i am inspired; someday when i will be able enough; i will follow your footsteps! ! !
Yes this one is one of the best works of you dear. Very imagery and deep meaning. Fantastic and you deserve the best appreciation.
Thank you for inviting me to read this. I very much enjoy short and concise abstractions of this kind.
Short wordings and sweet poem with a rhyme..I gave a rating of 6/10...maybe you inser more paragraphs to make 12 stanza to form a sonnet.
..i wish i could give you more than 10..but sadly that is the only limit here..
..the sea was dust.. ..the dust was sea..and both were sky.. ..these words made a chill run through my body.. ..words were few..but very very powerful..
For poet, everything just inside the pen..you can create illusion in mind just by word..your pen is a wand if you are wizard hahahaha....but also your pen is like crown for a King... You never lost in word, if you as a poet sew the nice words for heart to wear..Love in poetry is exist as poet use pen to write...Hmm maybe use computer in today's life hahaha Joking_Unwritten Soul
All alone with your pen and the magic of sea, dust and sky. Many times words fall short to describe such magical moments of amazing beauty. Wonderful observaion, masterfully penned.
Hey Ahmed I like this- a little prayer of concentration for poets (like me) :)
A lovely poem, though short of words it is pact with meaning. Thank you for sharing.
Brilliant piece, short but says a lot. Thank you very much for sharing, this is amazing.
I'm not quit sure but I really enjoyed this poem. It's beautiful, and has a certain innocence about it. It gives you a Brie into the poets solitude while he's writting. Very good!