Sunday, February 6, 2011

Lost In Words Comments

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I have so many words
orbitting my thoughts
without space,
comma,
...
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Ibnu Din Assingkiri
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Mohammed Albalushi 14 February 2011

yes, sometime we get lost in words coz we need words that express our feeling in proper way and give our poems alife. very interesting poem

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Malaya Roses 06 February 2011

Sometimes... short words describe everything in simplicity but lost in that transition is part of human nature. It will come back to to again. Simple but huge question to answer. Tricky poem with intensity.

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Singkir Laut, Kedah, Malaysia
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