Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Lost In Winter Comments

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Lost in winter

And its winter! ! ! Soft touch! !
Sensation in thoughts
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Allemagne Roßmann 08 February 2010

Drift slipping inside with chill Extended heart stretching An unperformed history------poetic prudence in perfection.10/10

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Lana Grissom 06 February 2010

Good...keep writing. I invite you to read some mine as well. I'm still new to the site myself. Keep up the good wk!

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Briana Doni 03 February 2010

Very nice poem.....pictures of a dark winter were painted in my mind. And yet they were very soothing.

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Emu Getachew 03 February 2010

Welcome, I am excited for you. The piece flows effortlessly and its visual available. Pen is the paint brush to the poet; please keep writing....its fun enjoy!

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