Wednesday, October 26, 2016

Lost In Transit Comments

Rating: 5.0

The long awaited mail,
that did not come,
and the teen aged girl,
beautiful and naughty,
...
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 29 October 2016

Your fancies run riot.....Akhtarji! The unexpected turn of events must have given her back her lost youth! Great imagination!

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Kelly Kurt 27 October 2016

A powerful and emotional piece.60 years disappear quickly but return even quicker

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Rajnish Manga 27 October 2016

Extremely poignant. The irony lies in the affirmative reply from a lover to his beloved but the letter, due to an incomplete address, was delivered to the lady sixty years later. Beautifully crafted poem with an emotional denouement. Thanks for sharing.

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