Tuesday, May 24, 2016

Lost In Thought Comments

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On mornings like these
my thoughts run rampant
and my heart feels trampled
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Nika McGuin
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Seamus O Brian 06 September 2016

I know that feeling. :) Your descriptive imagery is compelling. Thank you!

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Daniel Brick 29 May 2016

THE WORLD SEEMS SO QUIET/AND MY MIND, SO LOUD - This mental state is stated so precisely by you it works its way through and liberates you. This isn't magic which would a force outside of you. It's the workiongs of your own mind and it is sufficiently agile to rescue the situation. Do you know Pink Floyd's DARK SIDE OF THE MOON (Once uipon a time EVERYBODY knew it. In an Amsterdam bar I sang it with three new Dutch friends and some beers!) The singer despairs: THERE'S SOMEONE IN MY HEAD BUT IT'S NOT ME. You don't despair. You're in charge.

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