Saturday, June 15, 2013

Lost In Their Firey Lies Comments

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I can see the fire in peoples eyes but 
I'm the ashes left behind 
then I Hear the air whispers words of dispair 
But the earth that quakes shakes me down
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Rose Bloodthorn
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Kelly Seale 27 June 2013

You Go Girl! Never stop writing...it's something you're born with and just takes writing to master..the more your write the better you'll get..and you're pretty darn good! Also, the more you read of other's works..the better you''ll get. Read novels of all kinds, learn from the writer's craft, their prose... You've got It! Now let it grow! ; -) Kelly.

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Fatima Nusairat 15 June 2013

Oh Rose how beautiful you are dear..love it..!

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Fatima Nusairat 15 June 2013

Oh Rose how beautiful you are dear..love it..!

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Gajanan Mishra 15 June 2013

I realize the path I must take, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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