I can see the fire in peoples eyes but
I'm the ashes left behind
then I Hear the air whispers words of dispair
But the earth that quakes shakes me down
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I realize the path I must take, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
You Go Girl! Never stop writing...it's something you're born with and just takes writing to master..the more your write the better you'll get..and you're pretty darn good! Also, the more you read of other's works..the better you''ll get. Read novels of all kinds, learn from the writer's craft, their prose... You've got It! Now let it grow! ; -) Kelly.