Thursday, June 7, 2007

Lost In The Past Comments

Rating: 4.8

The exuberant creek, the elevated hill
I suddenly felt a chill, in my numb fingers
Making me realize that still some part was alive
Leaving all behind that had once belonged to me
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Kavitha Krishnamurthy
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Rama Mani 19 December 2007

Lost in her self, I came with a renaissance. I died in her, where I found the glimpse of immortality, She is a mighty, declined to accept the verity, Is am I too idealistic, but life has always given me certainty Let the mercy fell on you, in adore is eternity. Love is immortality

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Tranquil Ocean 07 June 2007

I love this, Kavita.....its a different style than your usual....Good to see you experimenting. Love...TO

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