Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Lost In The Bodies Of Water Comments

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I'm a little girl lost in a sea of regret.
I've been so full of it, that my mind can't seem to forget.
No one wants to teach me how to ride these waves of life.
My parents swim right next to me, but can't help me through the pain and strife.
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Anna Petrashishina
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 08 February 2011

I like your poem Anna, many definitions, many interpretations, all flowing into one theme. You nailed this poem well. Write more.

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Anna Petrashishina 08 February 2011

whether its good or bad, don't be shy, give me a reply :) God bless!

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