Saturday, November 28, 2015

Lost In Self Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are lost in the woods of the jungle
and desperate to reach a place
which do not exists
to live peacefully in life.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2016

Hustle and bustle with life! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Darren Jkoeryo 29 November 2015

Terse and telling, Great one Man.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2015

Flying from places to places on the wings of wind is definitely amazing and witnessing this is marvelous. Amazing sharing definitely.10

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T Rajan Evol 28 November 2015

AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Souren Mondal 28 November 2015

Im four lines and a single sentence you capture an essential truth about our existence.. Wonderful poem Asim. Loved it!

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Shakil Ahmed 28 November 2015

fleeting time plays a very crucial role in human beings life, it never stops for any one- you have painted the theme very nicely in the poem, thanks for sharing,

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 November 2015

Sort and to the point.Liked it.

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M. Asim Nehal

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