Saturday, August 15, 2009

Lost In Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today I got lost in paradise
it didn't last long but it sure was nice
the world seemed to slow and almost stop
there was so much beauty being on top
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Ryan Waldron
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Qutaiba AlRefaei 15 August 2009

Hello, Wow, I have to say that's a great one, the kind I like to read, similar to my style of writing though I don't post much in here, Like the sky kissed the sea... that's just an insanely amazing way to describe it, Nice imagination, you actually took me there, perfectly executed the image, Not to forget, the title is also good, I personally pick a poem to read by its title, so it's something important, Have a nice day.

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