Thursday, April 16, 2015

Lost In Mind Comments

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Tears stain her face,
As she looks to the sky,
Her heart shattered
On the ground,
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Jessica Gabanyic
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 January 2016

She walks around Suffocated by the darkness, No one around to help her be found, she loses herself in sorrow. sorrow, pain, suffering, loneliness, depression. all these themes came into my mind as i read your poem. tony

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Sekharan Pookkat 16 April 2015

Tears stain her face - that means she was crying all the time and lost her world - darkness suffocated without help- charming presentation-

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