Lost in Love's Chant
I still can't call to mind our first meeting
But as we saw each other more frequently
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Well terrific way of understanding love. A lovely lyrics with profound love is exhibited in the exhibition of marvellous words. Top notch poems like this show you really deserves to in top 500 poets list. I adore your muse! 👌👍👍👍
Such a tremendous verse, Valsa. As I read the first stanza I think this many not be the first love, but it is the deepest, the most profound, most lasting love. Can it endure beyond mere mortality? Great poem, Valsa.
A beautiful poem on love. A love that sprouts in all romantic youths. A love that is kindled at first sight and kept in heart and nurtured by frequent meeting. A typical romance portrayed in natural sequence right from the first meeting to the moment his sweet voice falls in the ears. Marvellous....10
Like a piece of metal to a magnet I was drawn to you - the picture demonstrates that well, of whoever it may be! This is a beautiful poem with an apt title. The lines are well understood by those who have ever been 'in love'. A poem that evokes heavenly feelings of love, I liked it very much. Gets a 10 from me.
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You spoke to me in the inaudible language of your eyes And was bewitched by the clear glow on your face Like magnet to a piece of metal, I was drawn to you. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL THE WHOLE TRUTH FIST SIGHT 'TIS SILENTLY MISS
The meeting is valuable as this has given us the greater opportunity to feel each other. A piece of metal attracts magnet and this is love that has attracted attention. Beauty of mind is very well felt. Nice poem is well written...10+
(- ) for you, for your entire life to be seated on the best aromatic bud of roses before the rising sun before setting down of brightest moon and I will be lost there where your chanting voice gripes me inseparably for the entire life//
love a name of feelings lives in the heart sensitive heart comes with the rhythm of music comes though the sound of wind comes with the dancing body of new spring leaves comes with the melodious voice of nightingale comes by the first drops of drizzling here, in the temple of pure heart (- -)
Great love poem Valsa. Devotion excels more than romance there 10+
Your poem just made me recede to long, long years back, and re-live into the past with nostalgia. A lovely love [poem.
Oh, you made me get lost in this very romantic anthem to love! This poem has that indefinable something about a good love poem. 10+++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list
A very romantic and passionate poem of love. It expresses in beautiful detail that magical feeling that slowly develop into love. Each and every stanza holds us spellbound. So beautifully crafted and well conveyed.
A lovely romantic poem after a month-long silence... 'A pleasant ache tickled me from inside And I exploded with an inexpressible yearning! '..an honest expression on love...10/10
Love chant goes on among lover and Beloved. It mesmerizes heart and mind and there is possibility of loss of consciousness. You have so brilliantly and thrillingly inscribed this poem that bewitches the readers. I am citing here two lines...viz...As your words fell on me like ambrosia from heaven, Sweet and fragrant sensations danced within my brain. Really respected madam, it is a marvelous poem from your pen. Full vote.
Like magnet to a piece of metal, I was drawn to you...wonderful! A lustrous romantic poem dear madam...liked the way you have constructed this wonderful piece of work.............10/10
Well terrific way of understanding love. A lovely lyrics with profound love is exhibited in the exhibition of marvellous words. Top notch poems like this show you really deserves to in top 500 poets list. I adore your muse! 👌👍👍👍