Thursday, September 21, 2006

Lost In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love you,
But do you love me?
I can't understand why you are doing this to me.
You told me you loved me
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San Antonio Can! High School
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Geoff Warden 26 September 2006

Angela: well versed poem.....if I may suggest though, use this as a first draft and add to it, you will find your poems take a whole new life.....G

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