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Wow, the title was immediately captured by my eye, and the content is a perfect haiku.Thanks for sharing, Mamta. With best wishes, Yelena.
Wow! Splendid…and exquisite Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
very nice Haiku indeed. colorful and bright. take care see my new poems of 2010 on pg1
Beautiful...crisp & hit point blank. We lose all senses amidst these invading artificial lights. Loved it Ma'am, Ranjit.
I think, in the present scenario everyone feels like her (secretly or openly) . How life startles one at every step is stunning!
a lovely haiku on the city lights that astonish the small town girl.
the heat and cold...of these two lights...the village girl feels at home with th sky
sudden astonishment on merry and alive styles. Well poem written being Japanese style.
A nice haiku with hidden meanings. Title itself is very catchy and meaningful.
How true! The city lights have dazzled me for long! Now I cease to be impressed by them any more! Instead, I have moved out under the open sky and gaze up in amazement at God's galaxies - those 'star cities' in space beckon to me! Which made me to compose three poems -based on Astronomy! Hope you will like them, Mata ji? For your poem 10! From - Raj Nandy!
Very powerful in brevity of words...