Wednesday, March 11, 2015

Lost In Autumn Comments

Rating: 5.0

You went missing in the autumn
where were you hiding?
I loved to call you
for you to come running
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Leah Ayliffe
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Baquee Billah Ahmed 24 September 2018

nice poem.....................

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A creative composition that is loaded with love!

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Daniel Brick 12 March 2015

This poem has some links to the earlier one I reviewed, for example, TAKE ME BACK TO WHEN WE WERE DIVINE echoes WE WERE DIVINE, but I'm not pointing out redundancy! This theme - All the gods and goddesses are within is the way Joseph Campbell expressed it - needs to be emphasized through repeated statements of it evoking different contexts. This is also a poem of Rescue, and you generously give the credit to the other person, but even a cursory reading of the poem shows both parties have accomplished this recovery of SOUL in tandem.

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Daniel Brick 12 March 2015

This poem has some links to the earlier one I reviewed, for example, TAKE ME BACK TO WHEN WE WERE DIVINE echoes

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Daniel Brick 12 March 2015

This poem has some links to the earlier one I reviewed, for example, TAKE ME BACK TO WHEN WE WERE DIVINE echoes

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Leah Ayliffe

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