Thursday, May 26, 2011

Lost In A World Of Dreams. (Sad) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sometimes i feel like a person i do not know.
Like I'm stuck in a dream.
Or trapped in a illusion with no ware to go,
Ware nothing i know can ever change what iv seen.
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Poet of the River
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Kevin Patrick 01 June 2012

This must have been one of your first, its noticable the feelings your going through, if life where a dream I' would try and change the scenes.

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(De Va) 12 January 2012

The depth of emotion is so evident in your writing.....your pain comes through...blessings

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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