Friday, December 11, 2015

Lost In A Mysterious Triangle Comments

Rating: 5.0

How happy I was,
walking alone on the Milky Ways!
Eating light,
drinking light,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 December 2015

How happy I am, though lost in a triangle, I told the rainbow, .....Very beautifully presented this poem is and this amazes mind. Wisely drafted.10

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Hazel Durham 12 December 2015

As always so original with such a soothing flow that oozes happiness then dissatisfaction creeps in and a new joy is found all part of life, amazing write with very interesting note!

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Kelly Kurt 12 December 2015

A wonderful poem and note, Akhtar. Thanks

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