Sunday, March 6, 2016

Lost Humanity Comments

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Can we call ourselves humans?
Cold blooded clubbing, battering, slaughtering in mid street
Heedless of the blood shed
Intent on butchering fellow -beings for reasons trivial.
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Jaishree Nair
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Valsa George 07 March 2016

Rationalism drowned in temper tantrums Irrationalism surfacing from the darkness of ignorance Human elements fast fading The brotherhood lost in the desert of values...! The whole frightful and disturbing social scenario of modern times is summed up in these beautiful lines! A great write.... Jaishree!

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Dimitrios Galanis 07 March 2016

A whole scenere to depict the target of the poem.very vividly the scenes to feel the spark it lit its flame.

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Aarzoo Mehek 06 March 2016

Rationalism drowned in temper tantrums Irrationalism surfacing from the darkness of ignorance Human elements fast fading The brotherhood lost in the desert of values.. Bitter truth of present world. don't know where the world is heading. Should learn from these animals the lessons of humanity. very nicely penned down.10

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