Thursday, July 15, 2010

Lost Her Again….. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting in corner of my room,
Putting my head on my knee I was
crying for her doom…..
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Anita Trivedi
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Ramesh Rai 04 October 2013

Ego is nothing but foolishness. a nice tribute to your frnd

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Kunal Seth 26 January 2011

Hey This was again a very emotional piece if creativity but one thing common that I see here and in 'I wish..' is the sense of loss in both the cases the victim is you..My friend I appreciate your strength..Keep Walking... -me

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C N Prem Kumar 24 July 2010

The false ego gets a picturesque description through this poem. Very touchy and the feel is great.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 July 2010

Just because of my ego we lost all contacts, you are touching a very great theme of life and relationship... read sree ramakrishna paramahamsas teachings. he always spoke Ego.. it leads u to enlightenment. write and meditate more on the same theme.. you will help humans in their relationship with God and men.

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Amrit Rathi 18 July 2010

The poem is true expression of the pain of losing a friend just because of ego.The poem is so much full of pathos and feelings, it deserves 10+++

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Nooruddeen Mm 16 July 2010

Anita, I can see your feeling. Throughout the poem express it. It also gives a good message to the entire society. Good work Rgds Noor

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Preetam Shetty 16 July 2010

May no one ever find such pain....you have represented a very striking story....I am touched

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Antonio Liao 16 July 2010

Like cream in the cone of ice...coldness hammock the lips.....gorgeous poem I ever read....God bless

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Aastha Uppal 15 July 2010

emotions and feelings of a beautiful relationship - friendship perfectly beaded together in the strings of human errors.. its humans who commit mistakes in life but are surely entitled many chances to correct them.. an egoist may not always be one.. and blaming oneself never has and never will help to come out of our dark side.. the ego will go only when we make an effort instead of brooding over the harm it has already caused... nice flow and great write....

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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 July 2010

Your appeal perhaps to you first who has still the touch of her friendship. Let her go alone but who is still alive that is you, if you try to exist as yourself make it the memory simply and come out of the trance. Ego is a must quality of a human being, only when one is in the grave perhaps only then one is out of it. But we should practice in social life compromising unstandingness, it is a rare quality which human should acquire again. Well-written another sensitive writing which paints the poet's poetic efficiency. Regards, 10+ Apoet Bangla

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Matt Mooney 15 July 2010

We let time pass by when it comes to renewing friendships and relationships.This poem is an emotional account of how time does not stand still and how deep feelings for someone cannot be left unexpressed without a tearful outcome. At the same time in this case 'better late than ever' and there is an obvious timely expression of mutual love albeit in sad circumstances.10.

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