Sitting in corner of my room,
Putting my head on my knee I was
crying for her doom…..
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Hey This was again a very emotional piece if creativity but one thing common that I see here and in 'I wish..' is the sense of loss in both the cases the victim is you..My friend I appreciate your strength..Keep Walking... -me
The false ego gets a picturesque description through this poem. Very touchy and the feel is great.
Just because of my ego we lost all contacts, you are touching a very great theme of life and relationship... read sree ramakrishna paramahamsas teachings. he always spoke Ego.. it leads u to enlightenment. write and meditate more on the same theme.. you will help humans in their relationship with God and men.
The poem is true expression of the pain of losing a friend just because of ego.The poem is so much full of pathos and feelings, it deserves 10+++
Anita, I can see your feeling. Throughout the poem express it. It also gives a good message to the entire society. Good work Rgds Noor
May no one ever find such pain....you have represented a very striking story....I am touched
Like cream in the cone of ice...coldness hammock the lips.....gorgeous poem I ever read....God bless
emotions and feelings of a beautiful relationship - friendship perfectly beaded together in the strings of human errors.. its humans who commit mistakes in life but are surely entitled many chances to correct them.. an egoist may not always be one.. and blaming oneself never has and never will help to come out of our dark side.. the ego will go only when we make an effort instead of brooding over the harm it has already caused... nice flow and great write....
Your appeal perhaps to you first who has still the touch of her friendship. Let her go alone but who is still alive that is you, if you try to exist as yourself make it the memory simply and come out of the trance. Ego is a must quality of a human being, only when one is in the grave perhaps only then one is out of it. But we should practice in social life compromising unstandingness, it is a rare quality which human should acquire again. Well-written another sensitive writing which paints the poet's poetic efficiency. Regards, 10+ Apoet Bangla
We let time pass by when it comes to renewing friendships and relationships.This poem is an emotional account of how time does not stand still and how deep feelings for someone cannot be left unexpressed without a tearful outcome. At the same time in this case 'better late than ever' and there is an obvious timely expression of mutual love albeit in sad circumstances.10.
Ego is nothing but foolishness. a nice tribute to your frnd