Wednesday, March 26, 2008

Lost Heart Comments

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Her heart is broke because of him.
Loving him was a sin.
He promised her a good life.
But he turned around with a knife.
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Shastina McElmurry
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Nice job on the poem i can tell where its coming from because ive been there, not in the same way because im not a girl lol, but you understand right?

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Dislocated Heart 26 March 2008

This poem of yours.. reminds me of something.. very nicely writen. may that heart be found and loved again.

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Shastina McElmurry

Shastina McElmurry

Klamath Falls
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