Lost Girl Found. Comments

Sometimes it pays not to ask, when or why. Good girl you learned before it was too late. Very well presented

I liked the natural flow in your poem that so truthfully depicts your thoughts! 'I'll always want more from this life. As a child I wandered too deeply in my pretty mind, I was scared of all the things I'd never find. The world I may never see, A love so true it would kill me in the most beautiful way.' - Very beautiful indeed! 'I let myself surrender to the tide. I gave myself to the movement of the oceans wave. I go wherever it takes me, Where my good vibrations send me. I trust the starry universe, the metaphoric God, Where city and nature collide in harmony, I was reborn a freedom angel. I was found.' - Absolutely stunning!

Excellent narrative of a hard journey as well as a triumph of the kind. The poem speaks your mind and effectively conveys a message.

Yes, when we stop searching and looking for answers they suddenly find us, freeing us from all the things in life that bind us. In the end, locating oneself, surrendering and giving yourself the option to go wherever life takes you. A beautifully written poem, I enjoyed it immensely. It has rhythm and balance flowing throughout it. Thank you also for reading my poems and commenting I totally appreciated all your thoughtful comments. RoseAnn