Friday, October 12, 2007

Lost Gem On A Dusty Shelf.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

A polished gem sits,
On a dusty self,
Hasn’t been seen in a century or so,
Lost behind lifeless ordainments,
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Melissa Coventry
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Sofia Kioroglou 24 July 2015

This is a really beautiful poem.A gem of a piece indeed! I just love it!

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Al Ramos 20 February 2008

Beautiful, enough said. Let silence be the gem it can be.

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A gem of a piece indeed. This is enchanting. t x

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Alison Cassidy 13 October 2007

Melissa this is a most evocative poem. Your description of the abandoned room is so detailed, I can really see it - and the subject of your poem, the small gem, shines through your words. In particular: 'Long and graceful curtains play In a small breeze, That lifts the stale mist of stillness..' is beautiful. love, Allie xxxx

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