Lost From Your Grasp Comments

Just I cant be yours To live in your grasp Just not as what in your promise But here i am again Forgiving........touching expression with nice theme. In the long run of time relationship become fade and loose from the grasp. A brilliant poem shared startlingly.10

This poem has a remarkable quality. There is a suggestion that a relationship of a lifetime can slowly fall away from the grasp....like a fistful of sand. The tighter we hold and cling, the more is lost. Simply doing nothing will not prevent the drift, but it can slow it down. In time, all is lost. What remains is the memory....which is so unlike those grains of sand. A remarkable poem, Soul.

I love your choice of words... 'Remember me? In your promise A little warm castle Made of sweet time Built for me to live Between your hands' Beautiful...10

beautiful poetry... still searching for myself to be able to do so.... nice to read in others words to describe oneself feels... emotions are universal....

beautiful write enjoyed the read

Ah forgiveness no easy task I sometimes struggle with the concept especially those who have betrayed but you're right, does no good to hold a grudge it only poisons from within Enjoy your poem as always BB : O)

forgiveness is one of the keys to life it does no good to hold on to grudges. they just make for unhappy people. better to let it go and forget. enjoyed

I enjoy your poet notes as much as the poem, I think. Interesting to see how a mind arrives at that certain point and what then comes from the muse.. :)

It has been said that 'to err is human, to forgive, divine' - beautiful Soul, great sentiment.

good poem soul. we enjoy yr poetry

its phnomenol, a 10 for it. loved reading it. But here i am again Forgiving amazing lines. please read some of mine. :)

Wow! .. This poem is superb my friend, it melts the heart of the reader. Siya_! !

Beautiful poem with a great message to forgive...Loved reading each lines....Loved it.

A beautiful poem has come out from your 'doodling' of words and thoughts. The theme is nice. The message of unconditional forgiveness is great! Hands that water the plants may not be there, but the plants do gratefully remember the favour. This part touched me. When my wife is away from home, I look at the plants and wonder how much care she took of them to keep them alive! Great to see so many comments here. I applaud each and everyone of them for sharing their nice thoughts.

One story ends, another begins.It happens.Love, love, love very much the tune beneath the words.

Tender... evokative... very nice, Soul... Terry (and thank you for your kind comments and suggestion... I agree, but unfortunately am no artist)

nice poem and the images are just perfect: D

Beautiful story written with such deep emotions, beautifully expressed and a great message to always forgive!

One of your best and even a lil soulful but a 10 out of 1o for the poetic lyrical tones. Tc. :)

The imagination is superb. The ice v/s warmth in the life of ice. The feelings are pathetic but the idea is superb. Loved it greatly