Lost From Your Grasp Poem by Unwritten Soul
Lost From Your Grasp
Remember me?
In your promise
A little warm castle
Made of sweet time
Built for me to live
Between your hands
And i forever at the center
Protected as long as i still here
Remember those promise dear?
I know that it maybe NO,
But i still thankful
I was just the snowy ice
That never felt so warm before
And you shared me once to let me know
Changed, melted my soul as the water flow
Through your loosen fingers like the opened windows
You let me go
Gone and disappeared
Stolen by the cold air
By the ropes of sunlight hair
Remember you?
How cant I?
Because I promised once
Even though I've been forgotten
I still around you to support anytime
And when clouds sending me back, i returned
Fallen and buried underneath your garden
I know that you maybe don't know
The flowers in your jars that bloom
Because of me give my life into them
Water, my strength in them
So you still have me
Your eyes can't see me
But i am here
Though the last promise
Have been forgotten
And I still here
Here
Just I cant be yours
To live in your grasp
Just not as what in your promise
But here i am again
Forgiving
forgiveness is one of the keys to life it does no good to hold on to grudges. they just make for unhappy people. better to let it go and forget. enjoyed
I enjoy your poet notes as much as the poem, I think. Interesting to see how a mind arrives at that certain point and what then comes from the muse.. :)
It has been said that 'to err is human, to forgive, divine' - beautiful Soul, great sentiment.
Just I cant be yours To live in your grasp Just not as what in your promise But here i am again Forgiving........touching expression with nice theme. In the long run of time relationship become fade and loose from the grasp. A brilliant poem shared startlingly.10
This poem has a remarkable quality. There is a suggestion that a relationship of a lifetime can slowly fall away from the grasp....like a fistful of sand. The tighter we hold and cling, the more is lost. Simply doing nothing will not prevent the drift, but it can slow it down. In time, all is lost. What remains is the memory....which is so unlike those grains of sand. A remarkable poem, Soul.
Your kindness and sweetness really a great gift i ever have from friends. Thank you :)
I love your choice of words... 'Remember me? In your promise A little warm castle Made of sweet time Built for me to live Between your hands' Beautiful...10
beautiful poetry... still searching for myself to be able to do so.... nice to read in others words to describe oneself feels... emotions are universal....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/18/2025 11:32:09 AM # 1.0.0
Ah forgiveness no easy task I sometimes struggle with the concept especially those who have betrayed but you're right, does no good to hold a grudge it only poisons from within Enjoy your poem as always BB : O)