Friday, January 2, 2009

Lost Freindship Comments

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My mind becomes my prison
Chained to a heart which meant to cause no pain
Thoughts consume my every word
One voice is spoken
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Frandy Osias Louis
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Joseph Poewhit 02 January 2009

That last line is a zinger. Really reaches the bottom of the barrel.

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Jake Erkens 02 January 2009

nice write..me like ;)) keep up the great write!

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