Lost Forever Comments

There is a strange recipe in your poem ........ The recipe gives it the power of meaning it flows between the words giving it an effect of sorrow of grief. being alone can be good in times but the human nature always looks for others looks for it's own kind.......hope you find your way of the loneliness void Guess Who

Hmm! This dark pipe that flows through the lines is amazing.

no sounds escapes, too lost in void just beautifully written! !

trapped in time trapped in mind so powerful opening.........