Lost Forest's Ancient Chant Comments

It does sound like a chant. Meaningful and strongly expressed. Great work! A piece of art...10.

really good work.keep sharing.

What a poem to express your idea... Amazing the words are full of meaning and strong... I like the way of ending every line....it is a nice chant. I love it.. anguished wolves run gently dark smokes hug tightly grey eyes stare intensely frozen woods speak wisely anguished deer walk slowly dark mushrooms fly closely grey flames crawl shockingly frozen lagoons smile naively

A WONDERFUL IDEA WELL EXPRESSED........

I like the very ending.. nice work..

Great Job and well done. Pixie

Great write! Keep it up!

'lost hearts challenge destiny lost moods face bitter reality anguished wolves run gently dark smokes hug tightly grey eyes stare intensely frozen woods speak wisely' Well penned.

A strong and imaginative picture evoked by each line and providing an array of motion and plenty of action to amuse or awe the reader. The last two stanzas make one think of their meanings. Great and exiting reading.

pleasant to read and travel thru this surreal space.

a nice flow of verses to a virtual odyssey...great write

beautiful poem 10+++++++++++++++

I love the views of this poem its very nice thanks for sharing KRISTA

A very well thought out message that creates a brilliant mental picture, very nice!

Beautifully written piece with a good flow, I enjoyed reading it thanks, 10 Lynda xx

Very well written, awareness on the journey, finding your way, the challenge, the danger in it, the peace of it. Great to read.....10

highly expressive...as i c, most of ur poems are based on some or other music numbers!

A great write! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing!

Very well expressed! Of how people..have lost and find their way... Very captivating..words neatly selected! A 10+++!

an adverbial poem with soothing rhymes. I enjoyed reeding