Wednesday, February 12, 2014

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Regardless of the tongue with which we’re born,
the thoughts within develop at a pace
until the day when from us, they are torn,
and proffered to a wasteful human race.
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Dan Reynolds
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Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2014

Cleverly creative poem. I like the line, Our deepest thoughts may never see the page. As much as we poets write ourselves, feelings, emotions into our poems, something is always kept back, hidden from our written words. This is a great poem, I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 22 February 2014

To be technical, a perfect example of fourteen lines of iambic pentameter. Or if you like, a lovely little sonnet. Nicely written Dan.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 February 2014

Wow awesome thoughtprovoking rhymin muse. A reader's delight. Creatively crafted, im glad this made it to the page then. Pls review my latest poem.

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Prasanna Kumari 12 February 2014

it is true.....many times words fail to reveal our true feelings and thoughts....good poem

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