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I was the sight and epitome of shame
The voice and resounding sound of pain
Now look, it's your fault and you are to blame
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As a poet help us really a lot to penned our emotion and hurt inside our heart...writing helps so much to voice it out by penning it...and you penned it very well...thank you for sharing :)
Sylvi the hurt comes through, it must have been an appeasement for you. Well written now the hurt should be well forgotten, so leave it now. Bob
Sylvia a very poweful lost for good....i like it...thank you for sharing.
This reads like a vicious archaic curse and I like it for its power. Anger has to have a voice sometimes and you've given it one. I hope he didn't actually say too many of these things, though, Sylvi.
There seems to be a lot of negative feeling in this poem having read your other work I am not inclined to believe and put it down to variation of subject matter 10 Chris
Sylvi, so many times I have heard those words, and felt the hurt. Thank you - I know I'm not alone. You are right we are strong.. xx