Friday, January 4, 2008

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I was the sight and epitome of shame
The voice and resounding sound of pain
Now look, it's your fault and you are to blame
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Sylvi Sylva
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Claire Pigram 11 June 2009

Sylvi, so many times I have heard those words, and felt the hurt. Thank you - I know I'm not alone. You are right we are strong.. xx

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Ewigi Liebe 12 January 2008

As a poet help us really a lot to penned our emotion and hurt inside our heart...writing helps so much to voice it out by penning it...and you penned it very well...thank you for sharing :)

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Bob Blackwell 09 January 2008

Sylvi the hurt comes through, it must have been an appeasement for you. Well written now the hurt should be well forgotten, so leave it now. Bob

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Patrice James 08 January 2008

Sylvia a very poweful lost for good....i like it...thank you for sharing.

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Janice Windle 07 January 2008

This reads like a vicious archaic curse and I like it for its power. Anger has to have a voice sometimes and you've given it one. I hope he didn't actually say too many of these things, though, Sylvi.

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Broken Peaces 04 January 2008

There seems to be a lot of negative feeling in this poem having read your other work I am not inclined to believe and put it down to variation of subject matter 10 Chris

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