Sunday, February 19, 2012

Lost Existence Comments

Rating: 4.5

The grass melted
as the sea bled
into the sky
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Sara Hol
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Valerie Dohren 19 February 2012

Love this poem - very imaginative and well written.

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John Carse 19 February 2012

Well rounded and excellent imagery. It just sings - loved it very much. Take a look at my poems. Would love to hear from you. Regards.

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