So far away you are
my precious dreams
what I use to reach for
is now unseen
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A poignant write yet so beautifully crafted. All lines vividly depict loneliness brought about by lost love. Very touching and gripping. I like how you ended the poem. Very powerful line.
Losing dreams is same as losing hope...thank you for your comment! ..BUT new day brings new hope and dreams.
Losing your dreams is so painful and emotionally blinding; a moving poem.
I do get a little emotional sometimes. Tomorrow is a new day and new hope!
Masterfully and vividly depicting loneliness and the darkness separating the dreams.10+++.
Thank you for reading and for such a nice comment...glad you liked the poem..