So far away you are
my precious dreams
what I use to reach for
is now unseen
I use to hold you closely
in a tight embrace
now time stands still
and I cannot see your face
a mountain before me
are you on the other side
will I see my dreams again
can I turn the tide
stolen like a crime
I would use my last dime
to see my dreams again
tell me!
Is this the end?
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A poignant write yet so beautifully crafted. All lines vividly depict loneliness brought about by lost love. Very touching and gripping. I like how you ended the poem. Very powerful line.
Losing dreams is same as losing hope...thank you for your comment! ..BUT new day brings new hope and dreams.
Losing your dreams is so painful and emotionally blinding; a moving poem.
I do get a little emotional sometimes. Tomorrow is a new day and new hope!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Masterfully and vividly depicting loneliness and the darkness separating the dreams.10+++.
Thank you for reading and for such a nice comment...glad you liked the poem..