Lost Dreams Poem by Aqua Flower

Lost Dreams

Rating: 5.0


So far away you are
my precious dreams
what I use to reach for
is now unseen
I use to hold you closely
in a tight embrace
now time stands still
and I cannot see your face
a mountain before me
are you on the other side
will I see my dreams again
can I turn the tide
stolen like a crime
I would use my last dime
to see my dreams again
tell me!
Is this the end?

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Thursday, December 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amir Marandi 30 December 2018

Masterfully and vividly depicting loneliness and the darkness separating the dreams.10+++.

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Aqua Flower 16 March 2019

Thank you for reading and for such a nice comment...glad you liked the poem..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 December 2018

A poignant write yet so beautifully crafted. All lines vividly depict loneliness brought about by lost love. Very touching and gripping. I like how you ended the poem. Very powerful line.

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Aqua Flower 28 December 2018

Losing dreams is same as losing hope...thank you for your comment! ..BUT new day brings new hope and dreams.

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Carl Roussell 27 December 2018

Losing your dreams is so painful and emotionally blinding; a moving poem.

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Aqua Flower 28 December 2018

I do get a little emotional sometimes. Tomorrow is a new day and new hope!

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