Saturday, November 12, 2011

Lost Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.7

O dreams! the fallen flowers
You lost your grace, happy hours
And elegant petals at a glance
From my heart-garden's fragrance.
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Pari Dharawat 19 November 2011

Lost dreams, touching poem, it is so nice that I wished it would have more lines... nicely written

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ijlal Haider 14 November 2011

nice...... dreams compared with flowers

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 November 2011

Great write-up. I like the poem very much. May be, dreams are like thoughts. They come and vanish, however, very few are remembered and cherished. I cordially invite you to read my poems and comment on them.

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Unwritten Soul 13 November 2011

Like water dripping, the sound hitting the ears, so calming, melodramatic and here you bring that feeling again...tunes of heart that i feel, here in your writing...blissfully sad hahaha_Unwritten Soul

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