Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Lost Dreams Comments

Rating: 2.9

How soon we forget
The broken dreams of yesterday
Now scattered across the sands of time
Like broken bodies half covered and forgotten;
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Linda Ori
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Mohamed Ali 03 August 2011

I wanne evaluate the poem 'River of Time' but the system wouldn´t let me, so I choose a other one. You are my favorite poetess here on PH. Your themes are flawless and it seems as if you don´t need much effort to write them. Keep up the good work.10+

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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 November 2009

Vanishing dreams are always sad and painful in the illusive life? Linda holds a sensitive brush to paint such endeavors in strife.

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Dan Reynolds 04 November 2009

Those dreams are always worth ressurecting Linda. Nice work. Danny

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David Harris 03 November 2009

Linda, I once thought there was no way of resurrecting lost dreams. However somehow I did and I'm stronger for it now. Top marks and thanks for sharing this beautiful poem my friend. Hugs David

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Quin Faas 03 November 2009

beautiful.. reading this carried a 'light' through me..nicely penned

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rago rago 03 November 2009

lost dreams really written in a beautiful crafted way to ever remember again and again.....

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Ramesh T A 03 November 2009

It is truly impossible to retrieve the scattered dreams on the sands of life for safe keeping ever!

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