Its a beautiful dream
Like a crimson sun
On a milky blue sky
Birds flying to home
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I am very sure and sincerely wish with all my heart that your dreams will come in to reality. Every one dreams, and we always get feeling that. oh gosh I am just dreaming, it is never gona come true... but if you work towards them, you might be able to turn those dreams to real.. this is very good writing, nice composition...10 best wishes and warm regards shan
a very nice poem, beautiful in composition.nice flow and finish too.thanx for sharing. voted10 surya
The similes that are used for the descriptions of the lost dream are wonderful, the rhymes are very well chosen and the message of the poem is very well revealed....10++++
Now you have penned a sweet flowing words and very nice to read aloud...............loved it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
You captured the dreams in quite a pleasant flow of Poetry. Nice to read.......
instead of lost dream, it should have been called 'beautiful dream'. because it is beautiful another ten